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| author | Sarah Duck <git@sarahduck.ca> | 2025-10-07 02:37:02 -0700 |
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| committer | Sarah Duck <git@sarahduck.ca> | 2025-10-07 02:37:02 -0700 |
| commit | ceff198a74d297fd85d5a7cd07a8db0852b8c641 (patch) | |
| tree | 0e26a175feae8fcb3c632e0935931b4fee5c36c2 | |
| parent | c615aab93917f7a6a5ed3976c721adc412d3da01 (diff) | |
small tweak before bed
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diff --git a/Zamir/1TheFirstSong.md b/Zamir/1TheFirstSong.md index 87c79f7..d7c2018 100644 --- a/Zamir/1TheFirstSong.md +++ b/Zamir/1TheFirstSong.md @@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ Eventually, Zamir heard them. It sounded like a woman this time, and without an audience's screams. She was speaking about her desire to partake in various activities with someone next to a river. It was rather poetic in ways Zamir didn't quite grasp. She frequently interrupted her words to give thanks to unseen passersby, or curse when she played a blatantly discordant note. The man Zamir heard first was certainly superior. The smell of shit was also quite overbearing. -But it was enough. The imperfections gave her voice it's own beauty. A vulnerability overpowered by courage; she didn't let it stop her. Maybe Zamir wanted that? Is it okay to not be enough? The foreign sensations were creeping back in, and eventually the tears started to flow. Zamir sobbed, then wailed. It seemed to come in waves, and they had no control over it. It felt horrible, yet it felt so good. +But it was enough. The imperfections gave her voice it's own beauty. A vulnerability overpowered by courage; she didn't let it stop her. Maybe Zamir wanted that? Is it okay to not be enough? The foreign sensations were creeping back in. They unconsciously sway to the patterns in the sound, and eventually the tears start to flow. Zamir sobs, then wails. It came in waves, and they had no control over it. It felt horrible, yet it felt so good. But then the music stopped. "Hey, do you hear crying down there?" |