From d645569b036d4b14ea405a71378192a779e8db1c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Sarah B." <1029chris@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 7 Oct 2025 21:02:55 -0700
Subject: Barely started on the next section

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@@ -81,4 +81,13 @@ But then the music stopped. "Hey, do you hear crying down there?"
 
 Zamir slithers away as fast as they can. By the time they slow, the inexplicable feelings yet again elude them.
 
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+Zamir goes to a few more, and people are noticing things.
+Eventually mother confronts them. Zamir speaks about having finally found their ambition.
+Mother gives an ultimatum, and Zamir decides to leave, and is banished. Chapter 1 finished!
+-->
+
+Zamir feels different. Each time they attend a concert, a tiny piece of it becomes a part of them. It's called music, apparently. Humanoids do it to channel their feelings. Some even use it for spellcasting! It makes sense; it feels so powerful. Could Zamir weild this power too?
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+It's been weeks, and they haven't been caught yet. But they've been getting glares.
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